Remember me
as I was
before things changed
and took a lifelong pause.
Remember the me
that was so sure
that life could be shaped
the me that was pure.
Remember me
back when we
did not think
that in a blink
things would be so different
I did not know what this meant.
Remember me
as I do you
young and carefree
not once asking “who are you?”
Remember me
I did not have time, you see..
Thank you for reading! ππ I wrote this yesterday and would love to know what you think of it! Have a lovely day!
Lovely!
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Thank you so much for reading!! I appreciate it ππ
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I like it!π to me it’s saying, remember the good in me, the good I’ve done and the good feelings and memories I gave despite any bad endings
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Thank you so much for reading!! I love your perception of it! πππ
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Hi Elsie. Iβm a new blogger π I like to learn from other bloggers too. Can you please follow me back?
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Hi nice to meet u! Of course, I can’t wait to follow your blogging journey ππ
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It’s a beautiful piece β€
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate that! ππ
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I like it.
I like the tone, and a lot of people identify with it. When things begin to get complex in a relationship, and you want to be sure that he still wants you, and you want him to remember how it all was, before the storm came through, to get you through.
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Thank you so much! I love how you percieved it! When I was writing it I had Alzheimer’s in mind but also now reading it back I see it from your point of view and love that it can be taken in a way that can relate to more situations. Thank you for reading! ππ
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